Monday, 21 September 2009

The Envelope - Part 3

I had now produced two pieces of writing about 2 different photographs, my partner, Ashley had done the same. We were then asked to read our responses and combine the best elements from all 4 pieces of writing to write one final piece about one of the photo's. choosing one preferred story and adding to it.

We eventually chose to base the final one around my second story, draft shown below:

Our final piece:

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